Door
bell rang. A tall man wearing a leather jacket with his face covered with a
hood stood in front of him when he opened the door. He smiled upon seeing him,
shook hands and welcomed him in.
‘How
are you, sir’? Danny enquired as the words automatically slipped out of his
mouth.
He
raised his eyebrow in reply to his question.
Err...
sorry sir. Danny corrected himself and said, ‘How are you Mr. Reclusive
Billionaire?’
‘Fine,
as always’, he replied.
With
a smile, Danny handed him a briefcase stashed with money along with a small
metal box which seemed old but able to hold the necessary. ‘A small gift from
the team who is minting money like never before and it is all because of you’, his
beaming face said.
‘Blue! Wow! This is spectacular and rare’! A
pleasantly surprised look adorned his face upon opening the box. He kept on
admiring those beautiful blue eyes which were once a path finder seeking vision
for that mute but lethal animal called Tiger. To be precise a White Tiger.
After a while he kept the briefcase and the box inside the closet ensuring that
it is locked properly from outside.
The
next morning he was fuming upon reading the headlines. “A dead tiger found”,
“Business of skins”, ‘This has to be stopped. How can one behave in such an
inhuman way? Bloody rascals. One day they will even sell themselves for that
crisp bundle of currency!’ he screeched. Clenching his fist in rage he slammed
it on the breakfast table. The impact was such that the table broke one of its
legs. Yes, such was his muscular strength, inspite of him leaving the army many
years ago. He decided to take the matters in his own hands and planned to put
an end to this organised crime.
He
searched for similar kind of news, flipping pages of past news papers, cutting
out those articles and pinned it on the planning board in a proper sequence.
Several paper cuttings eventually hung from the planning board. Using his
strength of analyzing the clues from the dates, places and names of accused
involved, from numerous calls to various people, from getting the images of the
accused from the internet and various sources, he came to a conclusion and
decided to eliminate that strong and only link between the supplier and buyer. Ordinary
people can go wrong on this but not him. Yes, this was ‘The Analysis Man’ analyzing, a tag given when he used to work for the army.
For
the next few days he investigated the middleman’s daily routine and noticed one
similarity. He was frequent at a night club. ‘This is the perfect opportunity
to nail that bastard. Your time is up, Mr Sheru’, he grunted with a smug smile
on his face.
The
next evening he skimmed one of his favourite verses before executing the
planned action to push away doubts that had tugged in his minds.
Karmanye vaadhikaarasthay
maa phaleshu kadachana, maa karma-phala-hetur bhur ma ate sangho ‘stv
akarmaani.’
After
receiving the final confirmation from his informer, he left for the night club.
In
the back of his mind he knew that finding and killing Sheru will not be enough
as they will be back to business with a new middleman in a short span of time.
But so be it. It’s time to instill fear in them and then plan things
accordingly.
There wasn't a tinge of fear on his face as he was confident of his analysis. Armed
with a tiny syringe, placed carefully under the heaps of clothes hanging from
his body, he managed to enter the night club with ease. He straight away went
to the bar, took his seat and ordered a drink. He screened the place. People of
various ages and shapes burnt the dance floor - Some young and some pretending
to be young. Some swaying their hips whereas some enjoying the eye’s gape. From
locals to foreigners, everyone was busy with dance and drink.
He
noticed Sheru among his group of friends shouting and dancing. He waited and
studied his movements before advancing towards him.
First
he went towards the washroom and made himself ready for the attack. Sheru’s
group was in direct vision from where the washroom was located and he could see
Sheru clearly from here. He gave a final glance to his weapon and placed it in
the inner pocket of his jacket which he had left open. Thus making it easy to
fetch and attack. He looked towards Sheru, paced his footsteps in sync with his
movements and jockeyed his approach. His hands slowly moving towards the inner
pocket of his jacket. Nearing Sheru, he then pretended to jolt forward as
though he had been pushed from behind and slammed into him. Sheru was about to
fall from the push just then he held him to gather and with his right hand
jabbed the needle forward passing through his shirt with ease. He depressed the
plunger, shooting the contents of vial into Sheru.
With
such a loud noise blasting through the roof and Sheru busy dancing, it was
difficult for him to feel the needle prick.
‘Sorry’,
he said to Sheru and went ahead dancing and singing towards the exit. ‘It’s
fine’, he replied and continued dancing not knowing that the deadly chemical
injected into him will take effect in next ten minutes. Sheru’s end was nigh.
Next
day the headline read, “Sheru, the middleman found dead. Lots of animal skins
have been recovered from his place.”
Few
days later, after thorough investigation the team of local police and officers
from various agencies busted the gang of operatives smuggling illegal tiger
skins to various countries. Thus putting an end to this organised crime.
‘Finally,
it’s all over’, he heaved a sigh of relief and continued ‘What was started by
me – a reclusive self appointed vigilante is complete now.
Few
months later a team of policemen stood in front of his bungalow with a search
warrant.
They
were searching for that old metal box which can finally nail the kingpin of
this racket. It was kept as a public secret so that the kingpin is not
cautioned and allowed to flee the country. And hence the series of news reports
claiming an end to this but it actually wasn’t. They played smart.
With
meticulous interrogation of all those guilty, they came to a conclusion that Danny
had left a metal box with some retired army official. After searching many
homes they were finally standing at Ret. Maj. Nachapoku’s place.
Baffled
and left insulted Maj. allowed his bungalow to be searched, a palatial place
for a retired army man.
Few
hours of searching found Maj. in a soup when they recovered huge sums of money
and that old metal box. He pleaded to be ignorant about it, boasted about his
successes and laurels he earned when he served army but to no avail. He was
immediately taken into custody for further interrogation.
The
interrogation was one sided as he didn't reveal much but the search of his
bungalow led to further evidences against him. Apart from that they also
recovered his medical file which stated an alarming fact.
It
read...
Case
no. 484: Maj. Nachapoku is suffering
from Dissociative Identity Disorder (DID), dated 10 years ago.
The
medical records detail that once fighting against the infiltrators in a land surrounded
by wild animals Maj. was attacked by a tiger from rear but bravely fought the
animal and killed it before the animal could kill him. In the skirmish his left
leg got badly injured which eventually had to be amputated and in the due
course was replaced by Jaipur Foot.
This
incident took a beating on his agility severely and was asked to take a
voluntary retirement from the army. Though he was offered a desk job but he had
promptly declined the offer. It was not him but his ego talking. Once the
bright star of the Army, now thrown and abandoned just because he couldn't run
and fight the enemy.
Dissociative Identity Disorder |
But
how can a man of principles and discipline do that? His heart and mind were at
loggerheads. Heart pleading to forgive but mind adamant for retribution. Thus
resulting in DID.
“Sir,
with your permission can we take him for further diagnosis and treatment”,
asked Priyal and the officer replied affirmatively.
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