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Wednesday, 10 July 2013

Courageous

Published on: 7/10/2013 03:21:00 pm by Rohan Kachalia - 12 comments

Tossing the coin of my dreams, my intellect trundled only to realize that it will be wild to help myself in such a fashion. Looking upon the calendar, noticing the date and arming myself with a spotless and tidy postcard, I decided to inscribe.

Few years later

“Dear Samar,

Eloping with you was my naivety. Marrying you was my Love for you. With you, life was nothing less than a sugar coated pill till you betrayed. Earth shook beneath my feet. All the sugar had vanished from my life. Life had festered. Until I decided to voice my feelings. I feel much better now. I am able to breathe, to live again. It is believed that all the good things happen after some struggle and fight. So thank you for allowing me to struggle and fight my intellect now that you have gone.

Love .


Tears rolled down his cheeks as he continued to feel the pain reading it for the umpteenth time. Leaving it aside for the first time, he laid his hands on the book titled ‘Responsibility Towards.’

He went straight to the acknowledgement page to find it and there it was etched in bold letters.

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My sincere thanks to Samar....


His already moist eyes gave away upon reading it as he struggled for his last breath.

This post is in response to a contest hosted at WriteTribe. 
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12 comments:

  1. Anonymous11 July 2013 at 09:21

    A neat premise and structure. This story shows a lot of promise.

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    1. Rohan Kachalia11 July 2013 at 17:34

      Thanks Damyanti for such kind words! And welcome to PonderingTwo :)

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  2. Bhavya N11 July 2013 at 14:10

    I could never find it in myself to forgive someone who betrayed me, but over time we all change. Life changes us all.
    All the best for the contest.

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    1. Rohan Kachalia11 July 2013 at 17:37

      So agree with you Bhavya.... It's extremely hard to forgive the one who betrays but time has powers to heal and change things.. but to what extent no one can tell

      Thanks for dropping by and welcome to PonderingTwo :)

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  3. Sreedev Soman11 July 2013 at 14:25

    Wow...beautifully written...the emotions are exact and well expressed...loved reading it...good job...

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    1. Rohan Kachalia11 July 2013 at 17:38

      Thanks a lot Sreedav!!!Glad that you liked it.
      Welcome to PonderingTwo :)

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  4. Suzy13 July 2013 at 17:29

    Betrayal is a hard one to forgive, but eventually forgiveness is the only way to move on. Very nicely penned.

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    1. Rohan Kachalia16 July 2013 at 16:29

      Yes, it shatters your soul, your heart. But to move ahead one needs to forget and forgive... :) Thanks Suzy for dropping by.

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  5. Corinne Rodrigues15 July 2013 at 19:37

    Great premise, Rohan. Thanks for taking part in the contest.

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    1. Rohan Kachalia16 July 2013 at 16:47

      Thanks Ma'am. It was pleasure taking part... Looking forward to participating in more contests.. :)

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  6. Easwar Arumugam16 July 2013 at 21:10

    That's wonderful write loaded with emotions. Like it.

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    1. Rohan Kachalia17 July 2013 at 18:37

      Thanks so much Sir! Glad that you liked it :)

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