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Thursday, 24 October 2013


‘The weight has increased tremendously since we last met’, said a burly voice assumingly looking not so pleased with a crinkled brow.

A cute chuckle adorned the cherubic face.

A slight twinge inside and there came the deafening ‘aah’ as it moved, signalling that the time has come to relieve from the physical exertion.

This time will surely make it outwards. I knew it was my last day there as I could sense the coldness of fresh air blowing inside through the orderly incision.

Heart began throbbing with the passage of every second.

‘Congratulations! You’re blessed with a baby girl’.


100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe


This post is written for Write Tribe where the prompt being 'I knew it was my last day there'.
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  1. What a sweet take on the prompt.. And a happy one too. Cheers to a new beginning.

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    1. Thanks Vishal. Yes, arrival of the baby is indeed a feel good feeling for everyone! :)

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  3. A surprising end to your story. Loved it :)

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    1. Happy that you loved it and kept you hooked till the end with a surprise :)

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