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Sunday, 2 March 2014

Authentic or Not?

Published on: 3/02/2014 05:53:00 pm by Rohan Kachalia - 14 comments
‘Common push, push hard’, bellowed Priya as she waved a caring hand over her head.

Tanya yelped out hard in agony as Priya pushed with both her hands, using hers.

The tension on Priya’s face was evident as Tanya barely had any energy left in her.

‘It’s close, pretty close. One or two more push and it’s done’, said Aachal in an affirmative tone.

Priya patted Tanya’s cheek so as to make sure she doesn’t succumb to the pain.

Tanya screamed again, pushing as much as she could along with Priya’s help and finally she was relieved as they heard the sweet cry of a baby.

‘Cut it’, said the director appreciating all of them for pulling out a fantastic and a genuine looking scene.

‘Who says acting is an easy job’, exclaimed Priya as she took a sip of her green tea. 



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14 comments:

  1. Sreeja Praveen2 March 2014 at 18:38

    Aah... I thought it was a genuine scene of childbirth, as in Three Idiots. That was a fantastic twist, well crafted !

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    1. Rohan Kachalia3 March 2014 at 14:09

      Thank you so much! Glad that you liked it :)

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  2. Dr Roshan Radhakrishnan2 March 2014 at 20:57

    hehe... nice. A good twist at the end :)

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  3. Shailaja V3 March 2014 at 10:59

    I realised it was childbirth, but did not see the 'movie' bit coming! How good is that?!

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    1. Rohan Kachalia3 March 2014 at 14:11

      Am so glad that you liked the twist in the end.. I guess it is good, ain't it? :)

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  4. Anonymous3 March 2014 at 13:56

    Oh! Love the end and was wondering that it's real scene for delivering. It's true acting is tough call despite people think it's easy to act. Love your take:)

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    1. Rohan Kachalia13 March 2014 at 17:10

      Thank you so much Vishal :)
      Yes acting is indeed a difficult job.

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  5. Richa Singh3 March 2014 at 19:16

    Wow! In this case the director was you I believe reliving a perfect scene through words!

    Richa

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    1. Rohan Kachalia13 March 2014 at 17:11

      Oh wow!! That goes as a big big compliment! Thank you Richa :)

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  6. Anonymous4 March 2014 at 18:54

    Nice twist in the end!

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  7. Anita Sabat5 March 2014 at 09:51

    I love movies & was grinning at the end! Perfect take, indeed! :)
    Great superhit story! :)

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