Into the fourth day of #NaPoWriMo and #AtoZChallenge, I've decided to go with free verse rather
than the prompt.
So presenting my
theme, Haiku with a theme in theme, Love and then a Tanka on the similar theme.
Source: Google Images |
Deliticent feel
Sudden volcanic demerge
Deosculate soul
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Now, the Tanka attempted for the first time ever!!
Deep rooted feelings
Eventually erupt
That soothing vista
Pleasing arrangement of beats
Hearts marry for a warm kiss
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And below are my fellow #NaPoWriMo participants:
jaibalarao.com - Jaibala
justamom.blogspot.in - Sfurti
http://janakinagraj.com - Janaki
http://poojashridhar.blogspot.in - Pooja
http://andiwrite.com - Hrishikesh
http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in - Karan
http://viewsofpreethib.wordpress.com - Preeti
Do visit the above links to read some awesome posts. Cheers!!
that was so lovely :)
ReplyDeleteeven I have written a poem on first kiss, will share with you
Thank you Karan :)
DeleteYea please do share, would love to read it :)
I liked both.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteLovely write Rohan :)
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeleteWow Wow Wow...amazing...I am running out of words....I wish I could write these Rohan :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much :) :) It is pretty easy to write but a lil bit time consuming as you have to fit in the appropriate syllables.
DeleteLoved both :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deleteab ye tanka kya hai :-o !
ReplyDeleteHaikus amuse me. can never write one properly
Good one
Tanka is a extension of Haiku where the syllables will be in the sequence of 5-7-5-7-7.
DeleteThanks Afshan :)
Volcanic demerge..very nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Pooja :)
DeleteThank you :)
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