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Friday, 4 April 2014


Into the fourth day of #NaPoWriMo and #AtoZChallenge, I've decided to go with free verse rather than the prompt.

So presenting my theme, Haiku with a theme in theme, Love and then a Tanka on the similar theme.



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Deliticent feel
Sudden volcanic demerge
Deosculate soul



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Now, the Tanka attempted for the first time ever!!



Deep rooted feelings
Eventually erupt
That soothing vista
Pleasing arrangement of beats
Hearts marry for a warm kiss


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And below are my fellow #NaPoWriMo participants:

jaibalarao.com - Jaibala




http://andiwrite.com - Hrishikesh









Do visit the above links to read some awesome posts. Cheers!!
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18 comments:

  1. that was so lovely :)
    even I have written a poem on first kiss, will share with you

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    1. Thank you Karan :)

      Yea please do share, would love to read it :)

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  2. Wow Wow Wow...amazing...I am running out of words....I wish I could write these Rohan :)

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    1. Thank you so so much :) :) It is pretty easy to write but a lil bit time consuming as you have to fit in the appropriate syllables.

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  3. ab ye tanka kya hai :-o !
    Haikus amuse me. can never write one properly
    Good one

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    1. Tanka is a extension of Haiku where the syllables will be in the sequence of 5-7-5-7-7.

      Thanks Afshan :)

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  4. Volcanic demerge..very nicely done!

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