The Prompt for the NaPoWriMo today was "Today, let’s rewrite a famous poem, giving it our own spin. While any famous poem will do, if you haven’t already got one in mind, why not try your own version of Cesar Vallejo’s Black Stone Lying on a White Stone? If you’re not exactly sure how such a poem could be “re-written,” check out this recent poem by Stephen Burt, which riffs on Vallejo’s. Happy writing!” I chose this Shakespeare sonnet.
Also tagging the post to #AtoZChallene2014.
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Hitherto thy liberty in a free rides
the day
Betrothed and adighting to abear
their presence
Altogetherness enjoys the liberty with
a bouquet
A blossoming bud threatening to
flagrance
The pleasing camaraderie soothing
the heavenly sojourn
Igniting the clem of passion mounting
like a thunderous cloud
With some chike and feel playing to
the nocturne
Daysprings and dewfall dove to be
wowed
Days and years seems to be a passing
number
As thee mould into loadstar roles profound
with love
That millions of strange shadows on
thee tend to purr
And thee but one, can every shadow
lend the ladylove
With panache in all the external
grace thee have some part
But none, none like thee for a constant heart
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Listed below are my fellow NaPoWriMo Participants -
http://juztamom.blogspot.in/ - Sfurti
http://janakinagraj.com/ – Janaki
http://andiwrite.com/ – Hrishikesh
http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/ – Rohan
http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/ – Karan
Read the original after reading yours. I must say..job well done :)
ReplyDeleteLovely. The last line is a clincher.
ReplyDeleteThanks. Glad that you loved it :)
DeleteLovely :)
ReplyDeleteLovely..has the touch of a classic poem.
ReplyDeleteYou have made my day!! Thank you so much Pooja :)
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