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Sunday, 6 April 2014

Into the sixth day of NaPoWriMo and today's prompt is really interesting which made me to drop my Haiku Theme and attempt a poem based on the prompt.

This is an attempt at the “Shovel Poetry”. The idea is to take the last word from each line of another poem and use it as the last word in our own poem. 

I chose Clenched Soul by Pablo Neruda.

Also tagging the post to AtoZchallenge.

Source: Google Images

Lost into each other on this twilight

With clasped hand

Oblivious to the intruding world

Eyes fixated on each other’s window

A funnelling fiesta of Love tops

Passion shimmering like a scorching mid-day sun

With expressive eyes and unstill hand

As bodies clench

Exploring the unknown flexuous to know

An unknown then

Beauteous and aesthetic there

The amorous trance achieving fruition some what

As crescendo leaves suddenly

With you looking away

The dawn falling on this twilight

As the haunting dream hurt at my feet

With lonely evenings

And a glass of wine erasing the immortal statue 


And below are my fellow #NaPoWriMo participants:

jaibalarao.com - Jaibala

http://andiwrite.com - Hrishikesh

http://viewsofpreethib.wordpress.com - Preeti

Do visit the above links to read some awesome posts. Cheers!!

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  1. Beautiful as usual :)

  2. Read your poem, but as I am very bad at understanding poems, I was a bit lost after a few lines. So sorry about that. Am sure those who understand poetry will certainly find it very nice.

    1. Oh it's perfectly fine. Atleast you tried to read. :)

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