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Sunday, 6 January 2013

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 35; the thirty-fifth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "...and the world was silent again"

I lied there bleeding profusely and on the verge of losing my consciousness, the culprit being the last 10 minutes. A sms alert from her made me drive like never before, ignoring all the traffic rules.  The next minute I lay topsy-turvy with head against the steering wheel and hands bulging out of the window.
I was in deep slumber when he left for office. The previous day’s house warming party had taken a toll on my body and hence dozing. Suddenly woke up in shock with a man in front of my eyes, me gasping for breath, hands desperately reaching for the cell phone, as heart beats fade away.
It was getting dark, grey clouds hovered around the sky signalling heavy showers with thunderstorms. Yes, that day even the universe shed tears sensing their love that when they touched eachother, eternity rejoiced, igniting magic each time they came close as they expanded their journey to heaven. After crying incessantly the world was silent again.
PS: A 3 55er fiction have been tried here for the first time. Would love to have your feedback. :)
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  1. It is nice, the first one's end was unexpected.. Good one :)

  2. I am not sure whether the three stories are connected or not. I liked the first one most.

  3. Nice one. The minimalism adds to the effect.